Friday, March 7, 2008
Open Response Analysis 4
One perspective on race is that, it has no biological meaning. If you were able to turn a "white" and "black" person inside out, you would not be able to tell the difference. Another perspective that differs from that is, Race is like water and can take form on an object. The racists can decide what you are from, white to asian to aftrican american. These definitions are different becuse one believes that there is no trace of race, while the other tells ou race can take on any person. The definitions basically stand between race and no race.
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6 comments:
The Student/Person did a great job writing this essay. they gave alot of information and important facts about the topic. The spelling/grammar is ok they just need to review the article and check there spelling.This article does have alot of strength and not as much weakness.
I think this person's response was very well organized and said. But the only thing that stood out was that they need to check their spelling in some areas. Overall it was a good definition, the way they described it and explained it. This person did a very good job and should keep up the good work.
I LIKED WHAT THIS STUDENT WROTE AGAIN HE HAD FACTS AND STAYED ON TOPIC AND HIS ESSAY WAS ON POINT.
I think that this person did a good job, they had a good answer. One thing that I can say is that they just needed to look back at their work. They just needed to capitalize certain things, and put certain things in quotes bt overall i would give them a 3. They did a good job on it.
This student did a GOOD JOB!
I just think that they should have go back a reread what they have wrote and also they should go back and check they spelling and grammar. But other wise they did a good job cause they explain what they was talking.
This makes sense because if people could turn white to black or black to white. You wouldn't be able to tell the difference. I thought this person had a lot of good information. They had their work completed and organized. I would give him a 100%.
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